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December 21st, 2001, 03:13 AM
#1
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In retrospect,
Should it ever to be assumed
That You and I
Are One
Of the same page
Then surely
It must be only belonging
To the instant when,
In a state
Of unbeknownst Form,
The eyes
Swiftly traverse
The rapid crescendo
Of singular movement
--the page in curve--
Thus
Breathing life into
A blurry mass
Of corrugated lines,
Blending together
In a symphonic,
Momentary
Whole
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December 21st, 2001, 06:38 AM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
I didn't like the chopiness of this one... just too choppy for my liking.
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December 21st, 2001, 05:27 PM
#3
HB Forum Owner
i think its supposed to sound that way.
*shrugs*
i dunno. kinda like all the parts are just
the beginning of future sentences that, somehow, come together to make a translucent idea.
but that's just me.
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