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    THE ALCHEMIST

    In retrospect,
    Should it ever to be assumed
    That You and I
    Are One
    Of the same page
    Then surely
    It must be only belonging
    To the instant when,
    In a state
    Of unbeknownst Form,
    The eyes
    Swiftly traverse
    The rapid crescendo
    Of singular movement
    --the page in curve--
    Thus
    Breathing life into
    A blurry mass
    Of corrugated lines,
    Blending together
    In a symphonic,
    Momentary
    Whole


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    I didn't like the chopiness of this one... just too choppy for my liking.

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    i think its supposed to sound that way.
    *shrugs*
    i dunno. kinda like all the parts are just
    the beginning of future sentences that, somehow, come together to make a translucent idea.

    but that's just me.


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